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Reaching Perfection by ~Crazed-Writer:iconCrazed-Writer:



Cry yourself to sleep
Cut your wrists escape the pain
Come on baby take it away

I know your hurting
I see through your smile
It’s not your fault they’re all lying

I see you sitting all alone
You have your headphones on
Drowned out reality baby take it away

Someone mentioned that your family life sucks
It’s not your fault your parents hate you
Just come on baby don’t take it all away

Crying in your room
Parents yelling up to you
Lock your door turn up the music

Wish You could tell them
You wish you were perfect
©2007-2009 ~Crazed-Writer
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Author's Comments

If you're wondering No I do not personally have this family problem, but as any good writer (im so modest) I can see from the eyes of another (or at least try)

This is from the eyes of a friend of mine; poor her.

enjoy :thanks: :ninja:

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:iconx-innocence-x:
Awee, poor girl :hug:

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Simba...

No, I'm Jesus, LOL

:rose: Poet's Rapture :rose:
:iconfrizabell:
Powerful

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To Live We Have To Leave The Past Behind Us, Embrace The Present And Look Forward To The Future

*RawEm0tion ... Amazing Club.. Just Go
:iconcrazed-writer:
:hug: yeah i wish i cud help her

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LESBIAN/GAY PRIDE! :love:

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Bored As FUCK? [link] <--- go to it and entertain yourself :D (warning small side effects are - hang-overs and addictions.)
:iconcrazed-writer:
Thank you

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LESBIAN/GAY PRIDE! :love:

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Bored As FUCK? [link] <--- go to it and entertain yourself :D (warning small side effects are - hang-overs and addictions.)
:iconfrizabell:
No problems

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To Live We Have To Leave The Past Behind Us, Embrace The Present And Look Forward To The Future

*RawEm0tion ... Amazing Club.. Just Go
:iconclaudiacasanova:
This is really deep. I like the flow, for it is easy to follow. A lovely read any day.

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To be or not to be?

meh, lets just eat some pancakes and call it a day.

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:iconaltoidaddict1517:
I have a friend like this too... And i can't really help her with her situation. It is rather upsetting... but i can relate...

Very well written, very powerful and emotional... i like it

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