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He was my angel
My suicide
He always looked to me
With his homicidal eyes
His wings were black
Stained in blood
My fallen angel
From Above
He had no name
To speak of
He was My Satan
And yet my God
He was my love
Needing his hatred
Needing the pain
Always coming back
He never changed
Though I do not know
What to do
He was my angel
My suicide
I looked at him
With my blood struck eyes
As I left my body
My bright wings grew
Soft and beautifully white
As I flew
I knew
I wouldn’t come back
Not this time.
        Ahblaza Mayes
                 10-24-05
©2006-2009 ~Crazed-Writer
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Author's Comments

Okay I really Like how this poem came out, it's on my other account but I really think it deserves some respect, I wrote it awhile back when a friend of mine was upset over her boyfriend who she was very much in love with but he verbally abused her more often than life itself, I felt inspired to write this poem and it may be almost a hidden story but This poem is a story of A very dark angel.


This goes out to all girls who can't find the courage to leave the man they love, and stick with that man untill he leads her to her death. Good Luck.


Blaza

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:icongod-buddah-ala:
wow this is very powerful

good job

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Love, therefore, and tongue-tied simplicity
In the least speak most, to my capacity.
-A Mid Summer's Night Dream, William Shakespear
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thank you very much I felt that it was a needed to be said kind of thing. Thanks. oh and Very grateful for the :+fav:

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:icongod-buddah-ala:
no problem! :nod:

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"BAMF- UNLEASHED!"- Nightcrawler, Marvel: Ultimate Alliance.

Love, therefore, and tongue-tied simplicity
In the least speak most, to my capacity.
-A Mid Summer's Night Dream, William Shakespear
:iconcrazed-writer:
:D

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LESBIAN/GAY PRIDE! :love:

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Bored As FUCK? [link] <--- go to it and entertain yourself :D (warning small side effects are - hang-overs and addictions.)
:iconslei:
wow I love this! :heart:
wonderful job!

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"I'M A MOTHERFUCKIN' NIPPLE. WANT TO MAKE SOMETHING OF IT?"True story.
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:iconcrazed-writer:
thanks :D Im glad you like it, its one of my favourites that ive done

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LESBIAN/GAY PRIDE! :love:

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:iconslei:
:D no problem...I highly enjoyed it

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"I'M A MOTHERFUCKIN' NIPPLE. WANT TO MAKE SOMETHING OF IT?"True story.
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My icon was made by ~nikitt11
:iconcrazed-writer:
happy to hear that, im glad someone does I havent gotten very many comment O_O on anything :( but it'll pick up just gotta get my name out there have more people look at my page, put up some better poetry ^_^

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:iconabundantamenities:
He was My Satan
And yet my God

Love.


This is really great. Amazing imagery, great flow. True sorrow and pain.

You've captured spectacular emotion in this piece, bravo.

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This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
Not with a bang, but a whimper
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Thanks a bunch. I like that verse to the satan/god thing Im pretty proud of this piece, i guess i was just really inspired to write it.

Thanks a million, :D

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LESBIAN/GAY PRIDE! :love:

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