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Lying To My Best Friend by ~Crazed-Writer:iconCrazed-Writer:



I’ve been talking to you for the past two weeks now
Why in the world won’t you fess up just say so?
How can you go on without even mentioning?
Every little thing I know you wish you could say to me
I keep saying everyday
Come on we’re friends just tell me what’s up
We’ve been hanging around having a great time
But you’re keeping secrets and its hurting me
I’m wishing you’d just tell me


Deep down inside I don’t know how to say it
How to break to you
The thoughts that I am depriving you
I know I’m keeping secrets
And I can see in your eyes your hurting too
but how do I tell you
What do I say?
How do I bring the thoughts into words?
How do I tell you everything?


You’re hiding something from me
Tell me
Please Tell me!
Why are you hiding it from me?
What is it that I can’t know?
I thought you trusted me?



I want to tell you
But I can’t
I’m so not sure myself
That it hurts
I can’t
I just can’t tell anyone, not even my best friend.
©2007-2009 ~Crazed-Writer
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Author's Comments

Im the 1st perspective

and my best friend is the 2nd persepective

like

me stanza1

her stanza2

me stanza 3

her stanza 4


get it?


well my best friend I love her to death but there are things i know she refuses to tell me, and i know in time she'll tell me but it gave me the idea for this poem :D

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:iconfrizabell:
Aww, that's goood

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:iconcrazed-writer:
thanks

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:iconfrizabell:
No problems

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To Live We Have To Leave The Past Behind Us, Embrace The Present And Look Forward To The Future

*RawEm0tion ... Amazing Club.. Just Go
:iconfire-hawk:
I know that feeling. But it wasn't with another girl... Nicely written, and very accurate. ;)
:iconcrazed-writer:
thanks, and wow

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LESBIAN/GAY PRIDE! :love:

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Bored As FUCK? [link] <--- go to it and entertain yourself :D (warning small side effects are - hang-overs and addictions.)
:iconcrazed-writer:
yeah it wud suck to go thru that with a guy

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LESBIAN/GAY PRIDE! :love:

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Bored As FUCK? [link] <--- go to it and entertain yourself :D (warning small side effects are - hang-overs and addictions.)
:iconfire-hawk:
He was exceptionally good at covering things up..I got there in the end though.
:iconcrazed-writer:
Oh i c thats agood

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LESBIAN/GAY PRIDE! :love:

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